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The modernization of family life brings us convenience and comfort.One may enjoy TV or radio programs,communicate with his friends through telephone or work with his computer while his washing machine,refrigerator and air-conditioners are running.And by car or motorcycle one can quickly reach wherever he wants to go.

In spite of this,these modern facilities also bring us disadvantages.For example,radiation from TV sets and computers is harmful to our health;improper driving of cars and motorcycles becomes the major cause of traffc accidents.The quietness of disturbed by a false dialing or unwelcome phone call.But it is believed that these disadvantages will be disposed of with the improvement of modernization and our life will be more healthy and more comfortable.

妙语评析:这篇文章主要说明了家庭生活的现代化,在第一段列举了家庭生活现代化的种种表现,第二段说明这种现代化给我们的生活带来方便和舒适,但事物都是有两面性的,现代化的生活也会给人们带来不利,文章在第三段做了说明。

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1.With the rapid development of_____

2.Years ago,_____It is very common to_____

3.The_____brings us_____and_____.

4.In spite of this,_________But it is believed that________

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With the rapid development of________Years ago,________It is very common to________The________brings us________and________.

In spite of this,________But it is believed that________For example,________

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic“Popular Sports in China”.You composition should be based on your own understanding of the topic and it should be no less than 150words.

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Popular Sports in China

Sports are fourishing in China now.More and more people are willing to take part in sports of different kinds,such as table-tennis,football,volleyball,and so on.Every year there are many matches played on the city,provincial or national level.Sports are no longer limited to a few professional players.

Early in the morning people may be seen doing exercise.Martial arts like Tai Chi or swordplay which formerly were cultivated for self-defense,now have become a form of physical exercise and are practiced in parks,streets,gardens,or on campuses.In addition young and old people are also often seen running in order to build up their bodies.

China promotes sports to enhance the physical condition of its people.In the world the Chinese have become a strong people instead of“the weaklings of East Asia”.

妙语评析:文章在第一段首先阐述了体育运动在中国的蓬勃发展,越来越多的人参与体育锻炼,体育已经不再仅限于专业运动员了。第二段举例说明体育运动在中国的普及性,最后一段说明现在的中国人身体素质越来越好,已经不再是曾经的东亚病夫了。

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1.________are fourishing in China now

2.More and more people are willing to________such as________

3.________are no longer limited to________

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________are fourishing in China now

More and more people are willing to________such as________

________are no longer limited to________In addition________

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic“Ideals”.You composition should be based on your own understanding of the topic and it should be no less than 150words.

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Ideals

Everyone has his ideals.A businessman wishes to make greater proft;a farmer expects bumper harvests;a student tries to learn more and better.And everyone strives,with more or less effort,to realize his ideal.

One should be sensible about whether his ideal is well founded or not.If it is,one has to plan and work hard for its realization.Effort,skill and persistence are all necessary.And very often,one has to get help from others,including advice and support in one form or another.

My ideal is to become a doctor,It is said that the feld of medicine is a well-paid profession,but I take it as a lofty profession entrusted with saving people’s lives.To realize my ideal I have concentrated on laboratory work to develop the analytical skills necessary to become a qualifed doctor.I am sure I will realize my ideal if I pursuit.

妙语评析:这是篇说明自己理想的文章,开头第一段概述了每个人都有各自的理想,第二段说明人们要为自己的理想做出努力,最后一段讲自己的理想是什么并且如何才能实现自己的理想。

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1.Everyone has his________,________wishes to________,________expects________,________tries to________

2.My ideal is________It is said that________

3.To realize my ideal________

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Everyone has his________,________wishes to________,________expects________,________tries to________

My ideal is________It is said that________,but I take it as________

To realize my ideal________I am sure________

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic“Competition”.You composition should be based on your own understanding of the topic and it should be no less than 150words.

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Competition

Competition makes people original and creative.It is very necessary to compete if human society wants to advance.Even animals compete for survival.Without it,we would become lazy and nobody would rake any responsibility.When three monks live together,there will be no drinking water.This Chinese proverb vividly describes why China‘s productivity was so low before Mr Deng came to power.At that time,we had the so-called planned economy.There was no competition at all.So neither farmers nor workers worked hard.China was on the edge of collapse.

Competition can stimulate people to try their best to do anything.For example,in 100-meter race,each sportsman runs as quickly as possible,trying to win the champion.The same things happen in our society and in our daily life.If a company wants to surpass others,it must compete with them.It must raise its companies doing this will no doubt benefit the whole society and the whole human race.

Being a student,I must compete with other students in our studies.I must study hard in all the felds so that I can be a useful man when I enter the society after graduation.

妙语评析:文章的第一段先说明了竞争的重要性,它是人类发展进步所必须具备的意识。竞争无处不在,第二段举例说明竞争能激发人们的潜质,让人们竭尽所能地去做事。最后一段以自己为例说明竞争的重要性。

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1.It very necessary to________

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